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Writing advertising texts: from promise to specific communication

The advertising text should quickly explain the offer and give a reason to take further steps. The power of the message is due to the accuracy and specificity, not to the number of adjectives.

The advertising text should quickly explain the offer and give a reason to take further steps. The power of the message is due to the accuracy and specificity, not to the number of adjectives.

Save the fact behind the promise

Instead of starting with the word “best offer”, write out the information you can confirm. They may refer to the scope, way of cooperation, available variant or solution of a particular problem. On this basis, it is easier to build the message without unreasonable assurances.

If you cannot explain what “complementally” means, replace the word with the scope. The recipient needs to know what he will receive and what will be agreed on. The general term should not hide the missing information.

Prepare the different arguments

Several versions of the header can show the same subject from different perspectives: problem, process or application. It is not just about shifting the same words. Each variant should give a recognizable reason for interest.

Demonstration example: instead of “Professional top-quality pages” you can explain “The page on which the customer can easily find your offer”. This sentence still requires confirmation in the project, but indicates a specific direction of work and evaluation.

Match next sentence to header

The development should explain the promise rather than changing the subject. If the header says simple management, show what content the owner will be able to update. Do not go right away to an unrelated list of company services.

Check during the editorial:

  • Do you know who you're sending the message to;
  • what exactly are you offering;
  • the fact that supports the promise;
  • whether the conditions do not contradict the heading;
  • where the button leads;
  • whether the text sounds natural after reading.

Select the right next step

‘Buy’, ‘Ask for scope’ and ‘See examples’ mean different actions. The label should correspond to what is actually going to happen. Do not promise a ready valuation if the link opens the general form. brief for copywriter i a coherent target page.

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